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Monday

A Korean American marketing manager visited KR office to have customer meetings for two weeks.

Our sales team arranged the schedule of customer meetings ahead of time for him, and he started to visit the places yesterday.

I was supposed to join the meeting with customer yesterday, but I couldn't because of urgent issue from other customer.

After the meeting, I got a call from the manager and he asked if I could join the playing screen golf and grab a dinner with him, I said "yes".

We met at a screen golf place and started to play the game and dinner for around four hours. 

Three guys played the game, and my score was the worst, but it was really fun. After the game, we went to the second round for more drinks.

Revised Diary Entry

A Korean American marketing manager visited our KR office for two weeks to meet with customers.

Our sales team arranged his customer meeting schedule in advance, and he started visiting them yesterday.

I was supposed to join a customer meeting yesterday, but I couldn’t because of an urgent issue with another customer.

After the meeting, the manager called me and asked if I could join him for a round of screen golf and dinner. I said, “Yes.”

We met at a screen golf venue, played a game, and had dinner for about four hours.

Three of us played, and my score was the worst, but it was really fun. After the game, we went to a second round for more drinks.

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Key Corrections & Explanations

1. "visited KR office" → "visited our KR office"
   • ‘KR office’라고 하면 조금 어색할 수 있어. 회사의 한국 지사임을 명확히 하기 위해 ‘our KR office’라고 하면 더 자연스러워.
   • 📌 A Korean American marketing manager visited our KR office for two weeks to meet with customers.
   • 🇰🇷 (한국계 미국인 마케팅 매니저가 고객 미팅을 위해 2주 동안 우리 한국 지사를 방문했다.)
2. "arranged the schedule of customer meetings ahead of time" → "arranged his customer meeting schedule in advance"
   • "the schedule of customer meetings"보다는 "his customer meeting schedule"이 더 간결하고 자연스러워.
   • "ahead of time"도 맞지만, "in advance"가 더 자주 쓰이는 표현이야.
   • 📌 Our sales team arranged his customer meeting schedule in advance.
   • 🇰🇷 (우리 영업팀이 그의 고객 미팅 일정을 미리 조정했다.)
3. "urgent issue from other customer" → "urgent issue with another customer"
   • "issue from a customer"보다는 "issue with a customer"가 더 일반적인 표현이야.
   • "other customer" 대신 "another customer"를 사용하면 더 자연스럽고 문맥에 맞아.
   • 📌 I couldn’t because of an urgent issue with another customer.
   • 🇰🇷 (다른 고객의 긴급한 문제 때문에 참석하지 못했다.)
4. "I got a call from the manager and he asked if I could join the playing screen golf and grab a dinner" → "The manager called me and asked if I could join him for a round of screen golf and dinner."
   • "I got a call from the manager"보다는 "The manager called me"가 더 간결하고 자연스러워.
   • "join the playing screen golf" → "join him for a round of screen golf" (이 표현이 더 원어민스럽고 자연스러움.)
   • "grab a dinner" → "grab dinner" (식사 앞에 "a"를 붙이지 않음.)
   • 📌 The manager called me and asked if I could join him for a round of screen golf and dinner.
   • 🇰🇷 (매니저가 전화를 걸어 스크린 골프 한 판 치고 저녁을 함께할 수 있는지 물었다.)
5. "We met at a screen golf place and started to play the game and dinner for around four hours." → "We met at a screen golf venue, played a game, and had dinner for about four hours."
   • "place" 대신 "venue"를 사용하면 더 자연스럽고 격식 있는 표현이 됨.
   • "started to play the game and dinner" → "played a game, and had dinner" (더 자연스럽고 명확한 표현)
   • "for around four hours" → "for about four hours" ("about"이 더 일반적임.)
   • 📌 We met at a screen golf venue, played a game, and had dinner for about four hours.
   • 🇰🇷 (우리는 스크린 골프장에서 만나 게임을 하고 저녁을 먹으며 약 4시간을 보냈다.)
6. "Three guys played the game, and my score was the worst" → "Three of us played, and my score was the worst"
   • "Three guys"보다 "Three of us"가 더 자연스러워.
   • 📌 Three of us played, and my score was the worst, but it was really fun.
   • 🇰🇷 (우리 셋이서 게임을 했는데 내 점수가 제일 안 좋았지만 정말 재미있었다.)

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Three Useful English Expressions for a Hospital Visit

1️⃣ "I’m here for a check-up."

• (건강검진을 받으러 왔어요.)
• ✅ I’m here for a check-up. I have an appointment at 10 AM.
• (검진받으러 왔어요. 오전 10시에 예약이 있어요.)

2️⃣ "I’ve been having pain in my [body part] for a few days."

• (며칠 동안 [신체 부위]에 통증이 있어요.)
• ✅ I’ve been having pain in my lower back for a few days. It’s getting worse.
• (며칠 동안 허리 통증이 있어요. 점점 심해지고 있어요.)

3️⃣ "Do I need a prescription for this medication?"

• (이 약을 사려면 처방전이 필요하나요?)
• ✅ Do I need a prescription for this medication, or can I buy it over the counter?
• (이 약을 사려면 처방전이 필요한가요, 아니면 그냥 살 수 있나요?)

 

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