Chat GPT 로 영어 일기 100% 활용하기 (3/10)

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오늘도 영어 일기 쓰고 공부해 보기입니다.

 

일기 작성 : 

 

Sunday

 

I wake up early this morning and went golf practice.

It has been about 3years since I started playing golf after one of my customers recommended to start golf to playing together.

My average score of golf is around 90~100. One of my coworkers started gold at the same time I started.

I think his score is a bit better than me, but his average score is also around 88~100. It is a good thing there is a good rival or friend who has same interest. He is inspiring me to keep up more effort.

I hope we go to play golf soon because weather is getting warm.

 

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1. 교정된 일기 및 수정 사항

I woke up early this morning and went to golf practice.
It has been about three years since I started playing golf after one of my customers recommended it so we could play together.
My average golf score is around 90 to 100. One of my coworkers started golf at the same time I did.
I think his score is a bit better than mine, but his average score is also around 88 to 100. It's a good thing to have a rival or friend who has the same interest. He inspires me to put in more effort.
I hope we can play golf soon because the weather is getting warm.
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수정 사항 및 이유:

• "I wake up early this morning" → "I woke up early this morning": 'wake'을 과거형 'woke'로 변경하여 시제 일치를 맞췄습니다.​
• "went golf practice" → "went to golf practice": 'went' 다음에 전치사 'to'를 추가하여 올바른 표현으로 수정했습니다.​
• "about 3years" → "about three years": '3years'를 'three years'로 수정하여 숫자를 글자로 표기했습니다.​
• "recommended to start golf to playing together" → "recommended it so we could play together": 문장을 간결하게 재구성하여 의미를 명확히 했습니다.​
• "average score of golf" → "average golf score": 'of'를 제거하여 더 자연스러운 표현으로 수정했습니다.​
• "90~100" → "90 to 100": '~'를 'to'로 변경하여 영어 문장에 맞게 수정했습니다.​
• "started gold" → "started golf": 'gold'를 'golf'로 수정하여 철자 오류를 바로잡았습니다.​
• "better than me" → "better than mine": 비교 대상이 'score'이므로 'mine'으로 수정했습니다.​
• "has same interest" → "has the same interest": 'the'를 추가하여 문장을 자연스럽게 했습니다.​
• "inspiring me to keep up more effort" → "inspires me to put in more effort": 표현을 더 자연스럽게 수정했습니다.​

2. 영어 일기 작성에 도움이 될 만한 표현 3가지

• ~을 기대하다
  • 표현: look forward to + 명사/동명사​
  • 예문: "I look forward to meeting my friend tomorrow."
  • 해석: "나는 내일 친구를 만나는 것을 기대하고 있다."​
• ~하는 데 어려움을 겪다
  • 표현: have trouble (in) + 동명사​
  • 예문: "I had trouble finding the correct address."​
  • 해석: "나는 정확한 주소를 찾는 데 어려움을 겪었다."​
• ~에 익숙해지다
  • 표현: get used to + 명사/동명사​
  • 예문: "I'm getting used to waking up early every day."​
  • 해석: "나는 매일 일찍 일어나는 것에 익숙해지고 있다."