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Saturday

I woke up a bit late at 8:00 AM because today was weekends. As my diary routine, I took a pill of hypertension and read a book loud for 15 minutes. After that, I went gold practice place to improve my golf skill. I spent about 2hours for golf swing practice. I think the making the same golf swing in every time is difficult. Weather was worm and very shiny, so I thought it would be great to go playing golf today. I’m certain that every golf mania thought same thing today.

It’s been 2weeks since I started writing blog. I promised to write five stories in a day myself, but I’m not sure if I can keep this thing. However, I’ll do my best. Recenlty, I have one big concern about my son. He started high school life from this year, but he doesn't look like have interest in study.

 

 

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Saturday

I woke up a bit late at 8:00 AM because today was the weekend. As part of my daily routine, I took a pill for hypertension and read a book aloud for 15 minutes. After that, I went to the golf practice range to improve my golf skills. I spent about two hours practicing my golf swing. I think making the same golf swing consistently every time is difficult. The weather was warm and very sunny, so I thought it would be great to play golf today. I’m certain that every golf enthusiast had the same thought today.

It has been two weeks since I started writing my blog. I promised myself to write five stories a day, but I’m not sure if I can keep up with it. However, I’ll do my best. Recently, I have had one big concern about my son. He started high school this year, but he doesn’t seem interested in studying.

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🛠 Corrections & Explanations (수정 및 설명)

1. "because today was weekends" → "because today was the weekend"
   • ❌ "weekends" (복수형)은 "주말들"을 의미하지만, 특정한 오늘이 주말이라는 의미에서는 단수형 **"the weekend"**이 맞습니다.
   • ✅ "because today was the weekend" (오늘이 주말이었기 때문에)
   • 📌 한국어 해석: "오늘이 주말이었기 때문에 8시에 조금 늦게 일어났다."
2. "As my diary routine" → "As part of my daily routine"
   • ❌ **"diary routine"**은 어색한 표현입니다.
   • ✅ "daily routine"(일상적인 습관)이 더 자연스럽습니다.
   • 📌 한국어 해석: "일상의 일부로서..."
3. "read a book loud" → "read a book aloud"
   • ❌ **"loud"**는 형용사(큰 소리의)로, "aloud"(소리 내어 읽는)가 맞는 표현입니다.
   • ✅ "read a book aloud" (책을 소리 내어 읽었다)
4. "went gold practice place" → "went to the golf practice range"
   • ❌ "gold"(황금) 오타 → "golf"
   • ❌ "practice place"(연습 장소)보다는 "practice range"(연습장)가 더 자연스럽습니다.
   • ✅ "went to the golf practice range" (골프 연습장에 갔다)
5. "spent about 2hours for golf swing practice" → "spent about two hours practicing my golf swing"
   • ❌ "2hours" → "two hours" (문장에서 숫자는 보통 단어로 쓰는 것이 더 자연스럽습니다.)
   • ❌ "for golf swing practice" → "practicing my golf swing" (동명사 "practicing" 사용이 더 적절)
   • ✅ "spent about two hours practicing my golf swing" (약 두 시간 동안 골프 스윙 연습을 했다.)
6. "the making the same golf swing in every time" → "making the same golf swing consistently every time"
   • ❌ "the making" → "making" (동명사는 관사를 붙이지 않음)
   • ❌ "in every time" → "every time" ("every time" 자체가 "매번"이라는 의미이므로 전치사 필요 없음)
   • ✅ "making the same golf swing consistently every time" (매번 같은 골프 스윙을 하는 것은 어렵다.)
7. "Weather was worm and very shiny" → "The weather was warm and very sunny"
   • ❌ "worm"(벌레) 오타 → "warm"(따뜻한)
   • ❌ "shiny"(반짝이는)보다 "sunny"(화창한)가 날씨 표현에 더 적합함
   • ✅ "The weather was warm and very sunny" (날씨가 따뜻하고 매우 화창했다.)
8. "go playing golf" → "play golf"
   • ❌ **"go playing golf"**는 부자연스럽고, "go play golf" 혹은 **"play golf"**가 더 자연스러움
   • ✅ "play golf" (골프를 치다)
9. "every golf mania thought same thing" → "every golf enthusiast had the same thought"
   • ❌ **"golf mania"**는 비격식 표현으로, "골프광"을 의미하지만 자연스럽지 않음
   • ✅ "golf enthusiast" (골프 애호가)
   • ✅ "had the same thought" (같은 생각을 했다)
10. "It’s been 2weeks" → "It has been two weeks"
    • ✅ "It has been two weeks" (2주가 되었다)
11. "promised to write five stories in a day myself" → "promised myself to write five stories a day"
    • ✅ "promised myself" ("스스로에게 약속하다"라는 의미로 "myself"가 필요)
    • ✅ "five stories a day" ("하루에 다섯 개의 이야기"라는 자연스러운 표현)
12. "I'm not sure if I can keep this thing" → "I'm not sure if I can keep up with it"
    • ✅ "keep up with it" (계속 유지할 수 있을지)
13. "He doesn't look like have interest in study" → "He doesn’t seem interested in studying"
    • ✅ "doesn’t seem interested in studying" (공부에 흥미가 없는 것처럼 보인다.)