AI 를 이용한 영어 일기 작성 검토 및 공부 방법 (3/6/2025)

AI를 이용하여 영어 일기를 검토하고, 공부하는 방법.

일기 작성

Inital Version by myself  

 

I've been meaning to starty a diary for a long time, and I finally did yesterday.

It wasn't as easy as I expected, but I still tried to keep it.

I'll make it a habit to write in my diary every day.

Today, I got up at 5:40 AM.

It has been a bit long time, becuase I made this habit from last year after reading some books.

Followings are my dairy rutine except for weekends.

 

5:45 AM : Get up and read books 6pages by my voice.

6:10 AM : Study english.

7:10 AM : Excercise (practicing gold or jogging)

8:20 AM : Shower and light breakfirst.

8:40 AM : Head to office.

 

Recenly, I started a diet because I have a highertention and taking a pills for it.

My target weight is 73kg from 81kg. I saw some diat guideline on the youtube known as "switch on diet" and I've been followig the program. 

 

AI로 검토 및 수정사항 

Revised Version by AI

I've been meaning to start a diary for a long time, and I finally did yesterday.

It wasn't as easy as I expected, but I still tried to keep up with it.

I'll make it a habit to write in my diary every day.

 

Today, I got up at 5:40 AM.

It has been quite a long time since I started this habit last year after reading some books.

The following is my daily routine on weekdays:

 

5:45 AM – Get up and read six pages aloud.
6:10 AM – Study English.
7:10 AM – Exercise (practice golf or jog).
8:20 AM – Shower and have a light breakfast.
8:40 AM – Head to the office.

Recently, I started a diet because I have hypertension and am taking pills for it.

My target weight is 73 kg, down from 81 kg. I saw a diet guideline on YouTube called Switch On Diet, and I've been following the program.

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🔹 주요 수정 사항

1. "starty" → "start" (오타 수정)
2. "tried to keep it" → "tried to keep up with it"
   • "keep it"보다는 "keep up with it"이 더 자연스러움.
3. "It has been a bit long time" → "It has been quite a long time"
   • "a bit long time"은 어색한 표현, "quite a long time"이 더 자연스러움.
4. "I made this habit from last year" → "I started this habit last year"
   • "make a habit"는 "make it a habit to ~"로 써야 자연스럽고, 여기서는 "start a habit"가 더 적절함.
5. "Followings are my dairy rutine except for weekends." → "The following is my daily routine on weekdays."
   • "Followings"는 단독으로 사용되지 않음. "The following is"가 맞는 표현.
   • "dairy rutine" → "daily routine" (오타 수정)
   • "except for weekends" → "on weekdays"가 더 자연스러움.
6. "6pages" → "six pages"
   • 숫자는 문장 내에서 단어로 쓰는 것이 일반적.
7. "Excercise (practicing gold or jogging)" → "Exercise (practice golf or jog)"
   • "Excercise" → "Exercise" (오타 수정)
   • "practicing gold" → "practice golf" (오타 수정)
   • "or jogging" → "or jog" (병렬구조 유지)
8. "light breakfirst" → "light breakfast" (오타 수정)
9. "Recenly" → "Recently" (오타 수정)
10. "highertention" → "hypertension" (오타 수정)
11. "taking a pills" → "taking pills"
    • "a pills"는 문법적으로 틀림. "a pill" 또는 "pills"가 맞음.
12. "My target weight is 73kg from 81kg." → "My target weight is 73 kg, down from 81 kg."
    • "from 81 kg"보다는 "down from 81 kg"가 더 자연스러움.
13. "I saw some diat guideline on the youtube known as 'switch on diet'" → "I saw a diet guideline on YouTube called Switch On Diet"
    • "diat" → "diet" (오타 수정)
    • "the youtube" → "YouTube" (YouTube는 고유명사이므로 "the"를 사용하지 않음)
    • "known as" → "called" (이 문맥에서는 "called"이 더 자연스러움)
14. "I've been followig the program." → "I've been following the program."
    • "followig" → "following" (오타 수정)

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AI가 알려주는 유용한 표현

✨ 영어 일기 쓸 때 유용한 표현 3가지 ✨

1. "I'm trying to get into the habit of ~" → "나는 ~하는 습관을 들이려고 노력 중이야."

📌 I'm trying to get into the habit of waking up early and exercising every morning.
(나는 아침 일찍 일어나서 운동하는 습관을 들이려고 노력 중이야.)

2. "It's been a while since ~" → "~한 지 꽤 됐다."

📌 It's been a while since I started this morning routine.
(이 아침 루틴을 시작한 지 꽤 됐다.)

3. "I’ve been sticking to ~" → "나는 ~를 꾸준히 실천하고 있어."

📌 I’ve been sticking to my diet plan for two weeks now.
(나는 지금 2주째 다이어트 계획을 꾸준히 실천하고 있어.)

 

Keep up the good work.~~~