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영어 일기 쓰기에 AI활용한 공부 (3/20)

쌩양파 2025. 3. 21. 07:40

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At the first time when I started writing a diary in English, I worried about what subject or topic I should choose for it. But, I feel like I don’t need to worry about that because there are a lot of issues happened around me. I can find the topics easily by checking emails, reading news in web, watching TV, taking with family and friends and etc. Furthermore, I believe my skill of writing English diary is getting better. I feel I’m getting the hang of it. It took a long time to write a sentence in English at first time, but recently, the writing time is getting shorter than before. I think this habit(?) or diary routine must have improved my language skill. I will try to write a long story about specific topic like economics, politics, food recipe, travel, blog life, work like, my family, books, movies, whatever I want soon. As far as writing story about something, I should learn more English words and expression. I also interest in phrasal verb which frequently being used by native speakers.

 

AI가 수정해준 버전

At first, when I started writing a diary in English, I worried about what subject or topic I should choose for my entries. But, I feel like I don’t need to worry about that because there are a lot of things happening around me. I can find topics easily by checking emails, reading news on the web, watching TV, talking with family and friends, etc. Furthermore, I believe my skill in writing an English diary is getting better. I feel I’m getting the hang of it. It took a long time to write a sentence in English at first, but recently, the writing time has been getting shorter than before. I think this habit or diary routine must have improved my language skills. I will try to write a long story about a specific topic like economics, politics, food recipes, travel, blogging, work life, my family, books, movies, or whatever I want soon. As far as writing stories about something, I should learn more English words and expressions. I am also interested in phrasal verbs which are frequently used by native speakers.

수정된 부분 설명

  1. "At the first time" → "At first,"
    • "At first"는 "처음에"라는 의미로, "At the first time"보다 자연스럽습니다.
  2. "for it" → "for my entries"
    • "for it" 대신 "for my entries"로 수정하여 더 명확하게 표현했습니다.
  3. "issues happened" → "things happening"
    • "issues happened"는 시제와 문맥상 부자연스러워 "things happening"으로 수정했습니다.
  4. "topics" → "topics"
    • "the topics" 대신 "topics"로 수정하여 더 자연스럽게 표현했습니다.
  5. "in web" → "on the web"
    • "on the web"는 "웹에서"라는 의미로, "in web"보다 올바른 전치사 사용입니다.
  6. "taking" → "talking"
    • "taking"은 오타로, "talking"이 문맥에 맞습니다.
  7. "and etc." → "etc."
    • "etc." 자체가 "등등"이라는 의미이므로 "and"는 불필요합니다.
  8. "skill of writing English diary" → "skill in writing an English diary"
    • "skill in"이 더 자연스러운 표현입니다.
  9. "at first time" → "at first,"
    • "at first"는 "처음에"라는 의미로, "at first time"보다 자연스럽습니다.
  10. "is getting shorter" → "has been getting shorter"
    • 현재완료진행형을 사용하여 최근의 변화를 나타냈습니다.
  11. "habit(?)" → "habit"
    • 괄호는 불필요하므로 제거했습니다.
  12. "language skill" → "language skills"
    • 복수형으로 변경하여 문맥에 맞게 수정했습니다.
  13. "a specific topic like economics, politics, food recipe, travel, blog life, work like, my family, books, movies, whatever I want soon." → "a specific topic like economics, politics, food recipes, travel, blogging, work life, my family, books, movies, or whatever I want soon."
    • "food recipes," "blogging," "work life," "or" 등을 추가하여 문장을 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 만들었습니다.
  14. "writing story" → "writing stories"
    • 복수형으로 변경하여 문맥에 맞게 수정했습니다.
  15. "expression" → "expressions"
    • 복수형으로 변경하여 문맥에 맞게 수정했습니다.
  16. "interest in" → "interested in"
    • 형용사 "interested"를 사용하여 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만들었습니다.
  17. "phrasal verb" → "phrasal verbs"
    • 복수형으로 변경하여 문맥에 맞게 수정했습니다.
  18. "which frequently being used" → "which are frequently used"
    • 수동태 형태를 올바르게 수정했습니다.

 

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