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쌩양파 2025. 3. 20. 06:47

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Wednesday

 

My business trip is just around conner. My colleague and I still are worrying about the communication with co-workers who are working in the US because we need to use English to speak. I’ve been working here, international company and had have many chances to read, write and speak English but I’m not a native speaker. The worst thing is that I’m getting old. This mean it is not easy to improve my language skills even I keep studying it as much as I can every day. The choice what I had is by myself. I raised my hand to work with new account based on the US. So, there is no excuse. I hope that all these attempts such as writing a diary in English, reading movie script and speaking business expression in English could improve my communication skill. The time is not enough to upgrade my English level in a short time, but all I have to do is just trying everything for it, imaging the moment when I get better language speaking abilities.

 

수정된 버전

 

My business trip is just around the corner. My colleague and I are still worrying about the communication with co-workers who are working in the US because we need to use English to speak. I’ve been working here, at an international company, and have had many chances to read, write, and speak English, but I’m not a native speaker. The worst thing is that I’m getting old. This means it is not easy to improve my language skills even though I keep studying it as much as I can every day. The choice that I made is my own. I raised my hand to work with a new account based in the US. So, there is no excuse. I hope that all these attempts, such as writing a diary in English, reading movie scripts, and speaking business expressions in English, could improve my communication skills. There is not enough time to upgrade my English level in a short time, but all I have to do is just try everything for it, imagining the moment when I get better at language speaking abilities.

수정된 부분 설명

  1. "around conner" → "around the corner"
    • "Conner"는 "corner"의 오타입니다. "Just around the corner"는 "바로 코앞에"라는 의미의 관용구입니다.
  2. "still are worrying" → "are still worrying"
    • 부사의 위치를 조정하여 더 자연스러운 문장 구조로 변경했습니다.
  3. "here, international company" → "here, at an international company"
    • 전치사 "at"을 추가하여 문장을 더 명확하게 만들었습니다.
  4. "had have" → "have had"
    • 현재완료형의 올바른 형태로 수정했습니다.
  5. "This mean" → "This means"
    • 주어 "This"에 맞게 동사를 단수형으로 수정했습니다.
  6. "even I keep studying" → "even though I keep studying"
    • "even though"를 사용하여 종속절을 시작하는 것이 더 자연스럽습니다.
  7. "The choice what I had is by myself" → "The choice that I made is my own"
    • "what" 대신 "that"을 사용하고, "is by myself"를 "is my own"으로 수정하여 의미를 명확히 했습니다.
  8. "new account based on the US" → "a new account based in the US"
    • "based on" 대신 "based in"을 사용하여 위치를 나타내는 표현으로 수정했습니다.
  9. "movie script" → "movie scripts"
    • 복수형으로 변경하여 문맥에 맞게 수정했습니다.
  10. "business expression" → "business expressions"
    • 복수형으로 변경하여 문맥에 맞게 수정했습니다.
  11. "communication skill" → "communication skills"
    • 복수형으로 변경하여 문맥에 맞게 수정했습니다.
  12. "The time is not enough" → "There is not enough time"
    • 더 자연스러운 표현으로 수정했습니다.
  13. "just trying" → "just try"
    • 문맥에 맞게 동사의 형태를 수정했습니다.
  14. "imaging" → "imagining"
    • "imaging"은 "상상하다"라는 의미의 "imagining"의 오타입니다.
  15. "better language speaking abilities" → "better at language speaking abilities"
    • "better at"을 추가하여 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만들었습니다.

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